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Tend to agree with Sam, while the rain and the smell of damp leaves is for me a very personal, and not the most comfortable, has me sitting on the edge of my seat.

posted by jfm32 on October 5, 2008 at 4:16 PM | link to this | reply

A beautiful and thoughtful ...

... poem for the autumn life ... it's the first signs of the old to disappear, as a sadness but, at the same time as the law of the nature ... and then it's right - the spring will come ...  - genio

 

posted by ggXpress on October 5, 2008 at 12:58 PM | link to this | reply

I love the rain

posted by lustorlove on October 5, 2008 at 10:39 AM | link to this | reply

Good morning my darlin' Sinome! This is such exquisite imagery. I was enthralled to the maximum. Even though there was rain it did not put a damper on the glorious colors and depiction of Autumn. Having the ocean in there gave it such impetus. It is filled with varying waters and for me there is so much rain in the desert in the fall that it is a soothing balm for me. I love how your imagery sends me to others places as well. sam loves you!

posted by sam444 on October 5, 2008 at 8:37 AM | link to this | reply

I guess they've said it all my dear...if there's anything i might just add is for you to stay with such gentle and endearing heart which comes out in your wonderful poetry my dear one...Bless you....

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on October 5, 2008 at 7:43 AM | link to this | reply

A passion filled heart and a stirred up mind are such important things for a writer to possess.  Yours are very apparent to the readers of your poems. 

posted by TAPS. on October 5, 2008 at 6:53 AM | link to this | reply

Not only do I love this melancholic poem which really really talks to me but also the quote of one of my favorite poets of all times. I do remember the first line however as: il pleure dans  mon coer comme il pleut dans la rue?? It doesn't make any difference and probably my memory is failing me, but I don't have a book at hand to look it up. Thanks for your lovely comment on "The Deal". Can we have you for president please, then I would get citizenship.

posted by vogue on October 4, 2008 at 11:23 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

I love your poetry. It is beautiful, compelling and well done.

posted by Justi on October 4, 2008 at 9:01 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

You made my own autumn blues a little less depressing...

posted by Nautikos on October 4, 2008 at 5:11 PM | link to this | reply

YOU DID A GREAT JOB OF TAKING ME THERE, THANKS KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on October 4, 2008 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

You add color to the blues. Lovely oceanscape even in the rain,

posted by merkie on October 4, 2008 at 4:46 PM | link to this | reply

Metaphoric realism!! You do it well.

posted by EX_TURPI on October 4, 2008 at 2:51 PM | link to this | reply

You've made rain beautiful.  Thanks for stopping in on my blog and thanks for your holiday wishes!

posted by gapcohen on October 4, 2008 at 1:29 PM | link to this | reply

As always excellent

I love the pictures you created

posted by skye08 on October 4, 2008 at 1:06 PM | link to this | reply