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Sinome
That’s one heck of an invitation!! I wish we were friends in real life and I could come to you when my troubles become heavy so that we could remember the bubbles and heal the wounds. How very beautiful, Sinome, and how very, very touching.... 
posted by
Troosha
on October 4, 2008 at 8:11 AM
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You write language that travels w/ feeling love*** w/TLC, BCA, Bill’s Wave Blog on!
posted by
BC-A
on October 4, 2008 at 8:07 AM
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you are so beautiful person......travelling through your mind is awesome
posted by
Star5_
on October 4, 2008 at 7:40 AM
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Loved It!
I was moved by the rhythm you have weaved into words of wisdom there. The imagery is fine, the thought is fine, alright. The rhythm adds the essence and evokes the desired effect. It wasn't as linear and bland in amateur poetry. It was classical and I felt like surfing a tsunami of words. I can't decipher the meter whether iambic or trochaic or anapestic or whatever but fantastic rhythm. Kudos.
posted by
laxman_v
on October 3, 2008 at 11:28 PM
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I simply can' think of a more touching way to express the meaning and very essence of friendship than your beautiful, beautiful poem.
posted by
vogue
on October 3, 2008 at 9:42 PM
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Hello my darling Sinome! I want to thank you for your kind words today. I love you very much too! I need you to know that I think you are one of the finest poets of sustained imagery I have ever read. I have a deep respect for your work and I was so happy to learn I don't miss an entry. It would be a great loss for me. You are a splendid poetess and I am so honored you are my dear friend. Now this poem just exudes eloquent, inviting imagery. How could anyone not want to grab your hand and go! Love you so! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 3, 2008 at 9:28 PM
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This is wonderful, Sinome. You have such a way with words. What a beautiful place it must be inside your mind from whence the words come.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 3, 2008 at 9:10 PM
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This is a very interesting voice. I started as a reluctant reader, thinking "I'm not sure I'm ready for this because I'm not sure I want anyone looking into me this way", but I liked the gentle breeze and this art of persuasion to walk gently into this good night. It was step by step, alone at first, because that's how I like it, and I started feeling closer to my inner being--(hey, it's not that I'm disconnected from me, just that I haven't opened this door in a while)...so it was a surprise to have this voice speaking to me, and then we're walking together in Somewhere when all of a sudden it was ok for my inner soul to weep (which it did). Kind of like a spiritual bath. And most wonderful of all, I was not alone.
posted by
jfm32
on October 3, 2008 at 6:51 PM
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Such comfort in your words,understanding and hope.Excellent
posted by
merkie
on October 3, 2008 at 6:30 PM
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Great write; memories of a relationship left behind to begin another day
This is sooooooo goood!! I love it.
posted by
skye08
on October 3, 2008 at 4:24 PM
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That is beautiful...
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on October 3, 2008 at 3:16 PM
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Dry your tears and smile for me
really resonated as a line. Reminded me of 'Leaving on a Jet Plane' by Peter , Paul and Mary. Lovely. Thanks
posted by
malcolm
on October 3, 2008 at 10:43 AM
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A beautiful balm for those whose Love has been abandoned....well done!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on October 3, 2008 at 10:39 AM
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i don't have the words
poetry is a mystery to me...& tends to go right over my head...but this is really lovely..thank you.
posted by
mightyjo
on October 3, 2008 at 9:59 AM
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