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Sinome this is just incredible! I was so entranced with the key I did not anticipate the door being gone. This is stunningly superb! sam
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sam444
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October 3, 2008
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Wow.Quite an ending here. You've got me stirred . . . . I have so much catching up to do - I've
missed out on a lot of your poetry lately. Will find time to go back a little.


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yellowrose55
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October 3, 2008
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Wonderful setup and delivery. I even like the metaphysics. Ever consider being your own straight man?
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jfm32
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October 3, 2008
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Sinome
We sometimes think there’s a door – even wish for the key – but as your piece concludes we ultimately realize there is no door (perhaps its one of those revolving doors. They don’t require a key – just a simple push).
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Troosha
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October 3, 2008
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FIND A NEW KEY, MAY GOD BLESS, THANKS KENT
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Riversidepoet
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October 3, 2008
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Sometimes there is no need for a key my dear Sinome.....
the unseen door opens automatically; many blessings and thanks and have a wonderful weekend
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mariaki
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October 3, 2008
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Changing your thoughts can change your reality

beautifully done
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skye08
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October 3, 2008
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Fantastic work!
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_teddypoet_
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October 2, 2008
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