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Beautifully moving . . . passion filled wish.

posted by yellowrose55 on October 3, 2008 at 9:04 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful, i too believe she would have known, kent

posted by Riversidepoet on October 1, 2008 at 9:16 AM | link to this | reply

I think she would have been reading about herself through you as well. Such gorgeous imagery! sam

posted by sam444 on September 30, 2008 at 10:39 PM | link to this | reply

This is so very lovely, Sinome


I really love how the layout of your blog is looking!

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on September 30, 2008 at 3:35 PM | link to this | reply

Touching and so passionately said ...

posted by afzal50 on September 30, 2008 at 10:28 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Beautiful and very touching. And, like Troosh, I was also impressed with the subtle, but critical distinction you draw between simply describing what you see and hear, and describing the feelings evoked by your perceptions...

posted by Nautikos on September 30, 2008 at 6:54 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful!
such a strong feeling you're expressing, gorgeous!

posted by pelagus on September 29, 2008 at 10:38 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely...your wish is the same as mine...
maybe granted already.
Woof! from the wonder dog and from me too!

posted by Whacky on September 29, 2008 at 9:39 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

posted by Luz_Briar on September 29, 2008 at 6:03 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
She understood that I wrote not about  what I saw, or heard, or felt  
but about  what I felt when I saw or when I heard.  
That describes such an iimportant and yet tiny distinction so perfectly!!!!!  I bet she still knows, still reads, and still understands. 

posted by Troosha on September 29, 2008 at 8:13 AM | link to this | reply

A Mother's Love is unending
She knows and helps guide no matter which plane she is on.

posted by skye08 on September 29, 2008 at 6:23 AM | link to this | reply

Heartfelt and lovely

posted by malcolm on September 29, 2008 at 5:59 AM | link to this | reply

I think we all miss our Moms and their understanding. Me too.Hugs Marta

posted by merkie on September 28, 2008 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

I guessed straightaway that you were talking about your mum. I miss mine too, it's six months now that she is gone. I wrote a poem about her eyes when she was dying.

posted by vogue on September 28, 2008 at 9:17 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
I'll just bet your mom knew exactly the kind of wonderful artistic soul she had given birth to luv. I thought  of my deceased wife Joyce when I read that and it was comforting because I know she'd be happy for me with Kabu and our love.Love to ya from us kiddo.

posted by WileyJohn on September 28, 2008 at 8:37 PM | link to this | reply

NOTE:   Yes guys it is my Mom I am talking about.  She passed away almost 5 years ago but some times I miss her as if she had just gone away... sorry... I should have made it more clear...

posted by Sinome on September 28, 2008 at 8:19 PM | link to this | reply

is this your mom you are talking about?

posted by Lanetay on September 28, 2008 at 6:48 PM | link to this | reply

That's your mother you're talking about?
I wish that my mother who is no more now, were here and I know she would have known about my writings in the way you said.

posted by Straightforward on September 28, 2008 at 6:20 PM | link to this | reply

Who is she??????

posted by Star5_ on September 28, 2008 at 4:32 PM | link to this | reply