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WoW!
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9STAR
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September 16, 2008
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Luz Briar
Lots of drama there luv, sounds kind of like religion run amok
posted by
WileyJohn
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September 15, 2008
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Lionreign, Sammy, and Mysteria
Thanks so much for reading and the flattering comments!
posted by
Luz_Briar
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September 15, 2008
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i could see the banner of deceit waving as I read this...
the same banner that lies to all of us....
ps thank you for saving the doGGie...
posted by
mysteria
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September 15, 2008
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It is a fine dramatic monlogue! It carries much impetus! sam
posted by
sam444
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September 15, 2008
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speachless
I knew from your prose and poetry before this that you were good but, Luz, this is truly great. You show power and passion executed with an ability rarely seen outside Shakespeare. After reading this I sat in silence for several minutes, stunned and with hackles raised.
Bravo!
posted by
lionreign
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September 15, 2008
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Deconstruction
mostly about leaders who use cult/religion to manipulate, breakdown, and ultimately rebuild followers.
posted by
Luz_Briar
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September 14, 2008
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