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Hi Deborah.  This was soooo funny.  I didn't know that y'all was from the South! Well hush my puppies, who would have thought! Write on y'all!

Joe

posted by SFJoseph on August 9, 2008 at 7:38 PM | link to this | reply

Very cute!!!  I really loved it. 

posted by Sinome on August 9, 2008 at 6:01 PM | link to this | reply

Fun Poem ... thanks

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on August 9, 2008 at 5:51 PM | link to this | reply

Really liked off-beat simetry thu 1st 3 stanzas. After that a little long. But what the hell, you're probably a teacher. How do I sign up for Fall. I've been trying to practice this, but you just can't get this kind of teaching in NJ

posted by jfm32 on August 9, 2008 at 5:02 PM | link to this | reply

you are different, I like that

posted by muley12 on August 9, 2008 at 3:06 PM | link to this | reply

This was such a delightful read! I had a blast!  sam

posted by sam444 on August 9, 2008 at 1:01 PM | link to this | reply

Heeheehee Now I can speak southern Canadian "aaa"

posted by merkie on August 9, 2008 at 12:56 PM | link to this | reply

SF

That's was cute - enjoyed it!

posted by Troosha on August 9, 2008 at 12:42 PM | link to this | reply

Clever!

Can you do Irish?

posted by Ciel on August 9, 2008 at 12:03 PM | link to this | reply