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Perfect rhythm and a lovely sentiment. We probably all have those moments of wondering how our first love is doing.
posted by
Troosha
on July 29, 2008 at 8:29 AM
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Re: Sam
Thank you
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 29, 2008 at 8:26 AM
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thank you
thank you for all your comments. your poetry is fab you have a true talent. much love xxx
posted by
duracell
on July 29, 2008 at 8:25 AM
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What a wonderful walk down memory lane my friend!
We never forget our first true love this is a definite truth; many thanks and God bless; thanks also for your visit, much appreciated
posted by
mariaki
on July 29, 2008 at 6:43 AM
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Touching , sweet , and so well written !
posted by
afzal50
on July 29, 2008 at 5:44 AM
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How sweet!
So heart warming.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on July 29, 2008 at 3:12 AM
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Stopped in for another read! have a great day! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 29, 2008 at 1:29 AM
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You write from a treasure chest of imagination! Excellent! With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”
posted by
BC-A
on July 29, 2008 at 1:00 AM
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Sometimes things are better left alone
I'm not sure I would appreciate my spouse's first love to come back into his life, if only for a short message - lol.
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 28, 2008 at 10:25 PM
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Amazingly sweet poem. Truly something you should send to whomever inspired it :-)
posted by
Sinome
on July 28, 2008 at 10:13 PM
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Re: Smitten, as always - you are too kind :)
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 28, 2008 at 9:42 PM
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Yes, nothing quite like it. And the heartache then didn't seem to last as long.
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 28, 2008 at 9:41 PM
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Re: Irrespective of age ... whenever ...
Just as normal, but hopefully not as often.
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 28, 2008 at 9:32 PM
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Re: lmao harderup, you confused me... I saw your comment on your blog
Lol, I was just commenting on Skye's response. Should have pressed reply...
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 28, 2008 at 9:30 PM
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Wonderful and romantic!
posted by
Katray2
on July 28, 2008 at 9:00 PM
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It's like first love has a way of haunting you for the rest of your life, even though you're probably happy with someone else.
Well done.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 28, 2008 at 7:25 PM
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how romantic/realistic. this one really moved me. must have been the way you wrote about innocence.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 28, 2008 at 7:21 PM
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Nothing like the first...
...and you conveyed it well.
posted by
metalrat
on July 28, 2008 at 6:51 PM
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That's cute :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 28, 2008 at 5:30 PM
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Hello! I am with vickip. It was peculiar. Great poem though! I like the cadence as well. sam
posted by
sam444
on July 28, 2008 at 5:09 PM
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lmao harderup, you confused me... I saw your comment on your blog
and thought I had really read someone else. Very nice poem!
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 28, 2008 at 4:46 PM
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wooah - i can hardly contain - how you say - it... Very nice
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 28, 2008 at 4:38 PM
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Irrespective of age ... whenever ...
... it happened, it was a strange and confusing time, mixed with giddy excitement and beliving of everlasting time - and who hasn't been through it?
Your poem gave memories that probably it just as normal as brushing teeth every day. -genio
posted by
ggXpress
on July 28, 2008 at 3:59 PM
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Memories like that brings out a secret smile sometimes, a smile you don't want to share.
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 28, 2008 at 3:07 PM
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I love this and it is spoken wonderfully
I often have fleeting encounters within my energy field of first love and you have written them perfectly.
posted by
skye08
on July 28, 2008 at 3:03 PM
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