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Wow! I had so many thoughts going through my head, so many lines that touched me. The inside of the being can be frightening and pleasant in an assorted color of life on the outside. I thought this poem was smashing! Well done. The highlighted letters for me were exceptionally effective. Such a grand style you have. sam
posted by
sam444
on May 27, 2008 at 8:06 AM
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caught me offgaurd
caught me offgaurd at the end,which was great,leaving murder a color up to the readers imagination is very sneaky and i like it
posted by
twomany
on May 26, 2008 at 1:42 PM
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