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When a haiku moves you.. you know it is good.. really good.



~Peace,, OTA
posted by
OTA.
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May 12, 2008
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How nostalgic. Beautiful, Nautikos.
posted by
TAPS.
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May 12, 2008
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3:45 PM
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Very beautiful ... I love the sense of peace
this made me feel.
posted by
VictoriaP
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May 12, 2008
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8:28 AM
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Particularly
beautiful this one haiku--
droplets trail down glass.
posted by
Ciel
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May 11, 2008
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Truly an inspirational moment ~ Haiku ---- maximus ~ This moves me...so poignant! ~ and an interpretation could be dual meaningful

Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
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May 10, 2008
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I like the imagery here.
Excellent and poignant Haiku, Jack.
posted by
metalrat
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May 10, 2008
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How DO you do it? I'll never master that art, so I humbly admire your haikus.
posted by
vogue
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May 10, 2008
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This is a pure haiku, unlike mine that follow line scheme! sam
posted by
sam444
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May 10, 2008
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