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Although not an expert by any means
I thought this was very well done; thank you
posted by
mariaki
on April 21, 2008 at 2:03 AM
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vogue ~.~
Yes! Come on...join the club! It's fun! Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on April 21, 2008 at 1:43 AM
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Ah Vogue, you had a Haiku moment I see...I read...rather ~ good inspirational moment here actually
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 20, 2008 at 8:55 PM
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I'm not an expert on Haiku, but this is a very compelling image ..
good job
posted by
VictoriaP
on April 20, 2008 at 7:27 PM
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Very good!
Even if, in the process, you explode the form of 5-7-5...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 20, 2008 at 5:58 PM
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EEEEKS THAT WAS GREAT
Tom Ugly I'm afraid is going to have to be finished from the book some day I'm sorry.
posted by
Kabu
on April 20, 2008 at 4:28 PM
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Great!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 20, 2008 at 11:31 AM
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Well done to you-yes-similar afterview! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on April 20, 2008 at 10:32 AM
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Nice Haiku.
Fantastic!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on April 20, 2008 at 8:50 AM
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Re:
Ok CRShelley, I get the drift.
posted by
vogue
on April 20, 2008 at 8:32 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on April 20, 2008 at 8:19 AM
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posted by
CRShelley
on April 20, 2008 at 8:16 AM
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Brillant! Way to go! Excellent try!
posted by
Wigopa_
on April 20, 2008 at 7:23 AM
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very nice try although I do agree with Sam. good luck to you and please keep trying.
from my heart to yours.
posted by
cmhnord
on April 20, 2008 at 6:47 AM
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Re:
Thank you for pointing that out to me. I will try better next time and stick to 5-7-5. We live and learn.
posted by
vogue
on April 20, 2008 at 6:32 AM
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Hi vogue, your loyal reader as well. This is actually a great tercet. A haiku has a syllable count of 5-7-5. sam
posted by
sam444
on April 20, 2008 at 5:46 AM
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This is most excellent. I had not thought in these terms, but it has to look as bad out there. sam
posted by
sam444
on April 20, 2008 at 5:44 AM
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I don't write haiku but from what I can tell, you did an excellent job
on this! Good imagery, powerful statement
posted by
Ariala
on April 20, 2008 at 5:32 AM
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