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Very nice.  Love kind of covers all the rest if you know how to use it.

posted by JBCaine on April 13, 2008 at 5:25 PM | link to this | reply

purple

There are always trials to get through

posted by lustorlove on April 13, 2008 at 1:16 PM | link to this | reply

wow what a beautiful and deep piece and the message is true

you have to take the bad with the good

posted by quietguy7 on April 13, 2008 at 12:23 PM | link to this | reply

Little Mermaid....Keep Your Voice Alive

Little mermaid, life I know,

Can be so painfully hard.

For some of us,

A miracle,

This far to come.

To cut short our days

But lengthens time for regret,

And will not end the pain.

But pain and sorrow

Will not flee,

Until something stronger

Takes its place,

For nature, you know,

A vacuum, will not allow.

--Courtjester, for Purple Mermaid, 4/13/2008

posted by Courtjester on April 13, 2008 at 12:05 PM | link to this | reply

you'll make it mermaid -- all of us are changing all the time

we are a sum of ourselves that will never be completely totalled.

posted by jefco on April 13, 2008 at 11:39 AM | link to this | reply

Yours always tugs at my heart, an uncomfortable yet peaceful feeling. I hope my kids remember

me when I'm gone, as well as those who's lives I've touched in some small way.

posted by Winged on April 13, 2008 at 7:59 AM | link to this | reply

I WILL REMEMBER YOU

Hi there, Purple Mermaid! Mayflower here. Very happy to know you are a Filipina like me. You write so well. I like how you express yourself, so very real. I'm from Kalibo, Aklan, Western Visayas. Maybe if you happen to go to Boracay, you can keep in touch with me. Would love to meet you in person! Keep on writing! I can't wait to read your poems many years from now. If they are so profound and deep at your age now, how much beauty more can they contain as you continue with life's journey! God bless you, dear!

posted by MAYFLOWER on April 13, 2008 at 7:23 AM | link to this | reply

that is one thing I NEVER want to lose - MEMORIES!!!!!!!  Very nice.

posted by majesticvisions on April 13, 2008 at 4:48 AM | link to this | reply

I love this quote especially ..

"Survival is not a sin"  You would think it is to some people - it's like they want you to fall apart and be mentally dead without them - survival is a gift you give yourself!  thank you again for an enjoyable read

posted by VictoriaP on April 13, 2008 at 4:03 AM | link to this | reply

This poem brought me close to tears mermaid. You have certainly touched my life.

posted by vogue on April 13, 2008 at 3:56 AM | link to this | reply

Your poems are inspiring ,powerful and always profound .

Please reread my post as I have corrected the stupid mistakes . My wife often distracts me when I am writing .

posted by afzal50 on April 13, 2008 at 3:39 AM | link to this | reply

Yes we should love people for their faults too

posted by Azur on April 13, 2008 at 2:28 AM | link to this | reply

this is simply beautiful purple mermaid

posted by whirlwindaffair on April 13, 2008 at 1:51 AM | link to this | reply

#1

And this, is a fine example on why you are #1, congrats and a very well written poem.

posted by jpart122500 on April 12, 2008 at 11:43 PM | link to this | reply

So true,

 ...So beautiful!"  

posted by Kolekshuns on April 12, 2008 at 10:27 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful...

So passionate beautifully written!

posted by Inspired8 on April 12, 2008 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

Congrats On Being #1!

posted by CRShelley on April 12, 2008 at 6:12 PM | link to this | reply

This is so touching ~ so intertwined with strength, compassion, mercy and understanding -- empathy, sympathy and much - so much in this writing Jen.  and Yes, write on!  and as I will always remember you ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on April 12, 2008 at 6:07 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful poem and so true!

posted by shelly_b on April 12, 2008 at 6:02 PM | link to this | reply

I sense beautiful self introspection and I think it is a grand message to spread. i am very proud of you. Are you feeling better? Hi Shae and Stef. I love you all!  mom/grandma

posted by sam444 on April 12, 2008 at 5:45 PM | link to this | reply

BEautiful poem Mermaid, Remembering is sometimes good, sometimes painful and it is terrible when we can not do it anymore.. I will remember you always sweetie, you with your wise tender words.  Take care of you.

posted by Sinome on April 12, 2008 at 5:24 PM | link to this | reply