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your writings are very touching and wise

posted by cmhnord on April 11, 2008 at 2:33 PM | link to this | reply

Okay...

Again I ask, why aren't you happily with someone? As if your creativity and beauty isn't enough. Okay, I guess there realy is 4 sides to every heart, one telling you how I feel, another saying I really enjoyed this poem.

The rest...the words are indescribable as to which inspires and of what creates and onto an inspiration of work that I haven't created yet. Yet with this, I find rewarding as the winning hand

posted by jpart122500 on April 10, 2008 at 10:41 PM | link to this | reply

Jen, so creative and so powerful in its emotion and message to convey...this is such good writing ~

Elyse

posted by elysianfields on April 10, 2008 at 8:41 AM | link to this | reply

I like this...you have quite the vocabulary. Impressive!

posted by TerAmerica on April 10, 2008 at 8:25 AM | link to this | reply

Presented so uniquely to an age old problem, the straying husband...ex...

posted by Winged on April 10, 2008 at 6:56 AM | link to this | reply

I think that is the most unique I have seen yet. Very very well done!!! And fun too!

posted by majesticvisions on April 10, 2008 at 3:52 AM | link to this | reply

Yes my dear Jen

but we can also "fix" the cards in our favour

Very cleverly done dear heart; I thoroughly enjoyed this read; thank you and God bless and sustain you in your recovery my friend

posted by mariaki on April 10, 2008 at 2:49 AM | link to this | reply

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posted by mysteria on April 9, 2008 at 11:36 PM | link to this | reply

Let's Play Poker

This was a fun poem. Thanks for sharing.

posted by Kolekshuns on April 9, 2008 at 11:08 PM | link to this | reply

How fun and cleaver

A joy to read - thank you

posted by Rhisiart_Inside_Out on April 9, 2008 at 9:26 PM | link to this | reply

I love poker (and poking) very clever verse....well done

posted by jefco on April 9, 2008 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

Fantastic Purple.

First I say this for you, and then for the poem, it's simply fantastic. I was glued and I was amazed. This I must re-read, or, better still, copy it for posterity. So loved it.

Bhaskar

posted by Bhaskar.ing on April 9, 2008 at 8:29 PM | link to this | reply

Most excellent concept! Please do not worry I am just feeling the effect of a new medication regime. How are you? Give the kiddos a hug for me please! Love always, mom

posted by sam444 on April 9, 2008 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

Well written poem and I agree with your statement !

posted by afzal50 on April 9, 2008 at 6:48 PM | link to this | reply

posted by CRShelley on April 9, 2008 at 5:26 PM | link to this | reply

clever!

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