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nice twist !! Awesome story
posted by
jefco
on April 10, 2008 at 10:29 AM
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Great story, I love the ones I can not predict the end half way through it and in this one I did not see the end comming till the very last sentences. Amazing!!! you are very talented
posted by
Sinome
on April 8, 2008 at 8:07 PM
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Explosive! I did not see this one coming! Bravo! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 8, 2008 at 1:14 PM
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Where did you find that ashes can be made into diamonds? Seems intriguing.
posted by
ErickWrites
on April 8, 2008 at 6:39 AM
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I agree w/ mariake........she let him win since she was unable to find a way to forgive him during her life....I would think that EVERYTIME she looked at that ring she thought of him...it caused her pain yet she continued to wear the ring until it finally killed her.
posted by
ZenMom
on April 8, 2008 at 5:50 AM
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OMG what a story!
Very well told although my view of the situation would have to be that she allowed him to win! Great tale; well done and thank you
posted by
mariaki
on April 8, 2008 at 4:05 AM
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goodness sweetheart, some story you got here! i'd say rather short but you did bag every single issue to incorporate the entire scenario! very well done! He did win in some way i guess...great plot!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on April 8, 2008 at 3:57 AM
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