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Fantastic...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on April 2, 2008 at 10:48 PM | link to this | reply

You passion emanates from the depth of your soul my dearest Jen. I love you, mom! 

posted by sam444 on April 2, 2008 at 1:57 PM | link to this | reply

There is always such passion in each word you write....

posted by Troosha on April 2, 2008 at 10:33 AM | link to this | reply

said so well...

posted by star4sky5 on April 2, 2008 at 8:24 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful poetry.

joe

posted by LongoGeremia on April 2, 2008 at 4:16 AM | link to this | reply

I need a new cathegory for this poem, I think I will make it : Sensually superb,  It is that and much more dear Mermaid,  Its so great to have you back in full talent :-)

posted by Sinome on April 1, 2008 at 9:36 PM | link to this | reply

very nice and the pic are lovely

posted by Lanetay on April 1, 2008 at 8:37 PM | link to this | reply

This is so sensual and alluring ~ evocative with the epitome of desire and I feel the Love ~ Jen ~ write on!!!! Elyse 

posted by elysianfields on April 1, 2008 at 7:07 PM | link to this | reply

Purple
Simply beautiful

posted by SEEDLINGS on April 1, 2008 at 6:13 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Just joking about the heart attack

posted by AardigeAfrikaner on April 1, 2008 at 5:55 PM | link to this | reply

If you were to tell me your name is not just Jen but Jennifer or something similar I'm going to have a heart attack right now.

Lovely picture of the blue moon.


posted by AardigeAfrikaner on April 1, 2008 at 5:53 PM | link to this | reply