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You frist few line sealed me what an great poet, Somewhere over the rainbow
posted by
Mystereo
on January 3, 2009 at 11:37 AM
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Thanks, Sam.
You are very kind. I am trying to improve on my rythm.
posted by
taxguy
on March 27, 2008 at 1:03 PM
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I like the peppiness and the cadence with grand imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 27, 2008 at 9:46 AM
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Oh what a good idea go for a long holiday but take the lap top
we want poetry from all over the globe!!!!!
posted by
Kabu
on March 26, 2008 at 8:49 PM
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good one!
I like your poem, and empathize with your desire to be elsewhere doing almost anything else. . .
posted by
kmer
on March 26, 2008 at 4:47 PM
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