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Jewel of words, just dropped by to say a Hi. Waiting to read more of you and from you.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 26, 2008 at 10:33 PM
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Wow, this is gorgeous poetry ~ stunning...thanks for coming to my blog and now I can read yours ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 24, 2008 at 5:43 PM
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Re: excellent!
BC-A. Thank you for your comments. They give me new angles to view my writing from.
posted by
wordjewels
on March 24, 2008 at 9:00 AM
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Re: wordjewels ... Excellent!
Bhaskar.ing, Thank you so much for your wisdom and healing inspiration. To receive this level of spiritual intimacy in this format is simply profound. Thank you and Blessings.
posted by
wordjewels
on March 24, 2008 at 8:55 AM
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Ahhh..but essentially we are all gods and goddesses Sinome, thank you so
much for touching in.
posted by
wordjewels
on March 24, 2008 at 8:45 AM
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excellent!
nice contrast and appeal to the senses
posted by
BC-A
on March 24, 2008 at 2:13 AM
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Beautiful metaphors, flowing verse, I just love this lines: "
She fears her vessel is weakening
Maybe she will be the sunrise her eyes have sought
breaking an unknown distant horizon"
I can identify with that feeling, even though I am no goddess :-), the feeling of not being able to take it anymore, and not fearing the end, rather welcoming it to be one with the things one loves. I have been there, many times . Thank you for sharing 
posted by
Sinome
on March 22, 2008 at 11:43 PM
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wordjewels ... Excellent!
" ... for now a valence of dust shadows the goddess
while she seeks to restore her internal sun". She will, she will. No doubt!
Deep into the sea went He from the left, and out came He and shone bright from the right.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 22, 2008 at 10:59 PM
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Re: That is beautiful...excellent!
Thank you Teddy, Sam and Soulbuilder. It's great to be read and heard, from these core corners of myself. I have found spiritual community here on Blogit.
posted by
wordjewels
on March 22, 2008 at 8:52 PM
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Re: A poem of hope...
Great to hear from you cheugon. Thank you. That hope was mustered up due to the process of writing. It was an emotional moment. Japan is a great place to spiritually retreat. There is an underlying serenity here. Take care.
posted by
wordjewels
on March 22, 2008 at 8:39 PM
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Excellent! Loved this!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 22, 2008 at 2:21 PM
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A poem of hope...
...for the Land of the Rising Sun....and for yourself? I love the "tobacco smoke" metaphor for America....so apropos! Flowing and eloquent verse!
posted by
metalrat
on March 22, 2008 at 1:29 PM
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I so agree with Teddy! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 22, 2008 at 12:29 PM
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That is beautiful...excellent!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 22, 2008 at 8:04 AM
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