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I love the idea of your closing couplet.
Great work, Mermaid!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on March 11, 2008 at 11:53 AM
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Very beautiful!!
posted by
tyleness
on March 11, 2008 at 7:02 AM
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Words fail my dear mermaid
truly an excellent post; I especially agree with your ending two liner of the what and what ifs with which I totally agree; thank you my friend; peace and blessings
posted by
mariaki
on March 11, 2008 at 5:02 AM
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Most beautiful, on love. on faith, on trust Ms PM
Love cannot endure indifference. It needs to be wanted. Like a lamp, it needs to be fed out of the oil of another's heart, or its flame burns low.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on March 10, 2008 at 11:57 PM
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Re: hello bluehand dear...thank you so much!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 10, 2008 at 10:54 PM
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Re: Elyse,Sue and Sinome...
thank you all my beloved ladies........
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 10, 2008 at 10:51 PM
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posted by
thecryptkeeper
on March 10, 2008 at 10:50 PM
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So much heart in one li'l Mermaid :-), so much feeling in just one heart... Beautiful Jen, gorgeous and so touching
posted by
Sinome
on March 10, 2008 at 9:54 PM
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u said so....
posted by
star4sky5
on March 10, 2008 at 9:18 PM
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This is gorgeous ~ now this is committment - to write it all out and speak from the heart, sealing it. This touched my heart deeply (((Purple))) -
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 10, 2008 at 9:09 PM
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Re: Great job!---wigopa dear....
thank you so much!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 10, 2008 at 8:55 PM
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Great job!
I can feeling the sentiment here.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 10, 2008 at 8:48 PM
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Great job!
I can feeling the sentiment here.
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 10, 2008 at 8:48 PM
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Re: thank you dear Sam!!!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 10, 2008 at 7:45 PM
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Re: Splendid!---kayzzaman dear.........
didnt know you're a photographer my friend...glad you approve of them...thank you dear!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 10, 2008 at 7:45 PM
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Re: Loving someone means never having to say sorry...
Ash and Lustorlove...thank you both........
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 10, 2008 at 7:44 PM
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Re:
soul dear, it's nice to hear from you again my friend....thank you!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on March 10, 2008 at 7:42 PM
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but who can you truet anymore?
posted by
Lanetay
on March 10, 2008 at 7:03 PM
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Painful rendition of the woes in words and their equal and opposite reaction to circumstances. sam
posted by
sam444
on March 10, 2008 at 3:28 PM
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Splendid!
Being a photographer myself, I like the accompanying pics too.
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 10, 2008 at 10:11 AM
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Loving someone means never having to say sorry...
it shows in the interaction...
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 10, 2008 at 9:34 AM
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Interesting poem!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 10, 2008 at 8:30 AM
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