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Vivid dream...beautiful in its quest and so rich --- certainly one to write of. I am speechless ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 7, 2008 at 7:00 AM
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A very exciting feel to this my friend.....
and slightly familiar...very well done;thank you
posted by
mariaki
on March 7, 2008 at 2:14 AM
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Grand work..
found the hunting of love a great thought. A great ride!
posted by
Wigopa_
on March 6, 2008 at 9:17 PM
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very imaginable. Made me feel like I should start running too. I have a lot of running dreams, and I somewhat figured out what they mean.....thanks for sharing this great writing.
posted by
majesticvisions
on March 6, 2008 at 11:07 AM
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Excellent poem! Great flow!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on March 6, 2008 at 10:27 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on March 6, 2008 at 10:27 AM
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A great poem. A blast to read. I loved the imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 6, 2008 at 10:25 AM
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Simply magical!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on March 6, 2008 at 10:21 AM
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Night
and drop my blood onto this earth
to breathe and chase again Two extremely powerful and vivid lines! As for the entire piece.....
posted by
Troosha
on March 6, 2008 at 8:33 AM
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oh this sent me on the crescendo of life, breathing --- inhaling exhaling, grasping inspiration and to apex then fruition...wow, this is a stunning poem. ~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 6, 2008 at 7:44 AM
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