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Life's more than just a fight...
ain't that the truth..well-said ! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on March 7, 2008 at 6:19 PM | link to this | reply

I love it Mermaid--I don't know what more to say, as I would be hard pressed to pick one part over another as to which I liked best.

Damon

posted by Damond on March 7, 2008 at 1:36 PM | link to this | reply

Purple, you never fail to elevate the likes of me, and an amazing pic

"Unchain yourself and don’t grieve

There’s a stairway to light…

Because life is more than just a ‘fight’..."

 

You are so creative to my sight

posted by Bhaskar.ing on March 5, 2008 at 10:31 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful words and amazing pictures that took my breath away

posted by Kabu on March 5, 2008 at 9:06 PM | link to this | reply

Re: This Should Be Dedicated To The World---Color dear...
thank you so much love...we cannot heal the whole world...but we can at least start within us dear...dont we? thank you dear...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 5, 2008 at 8:43 PM | link to this | reply

Re: well said..---sue sweetheart...
thank you love...hope you are fine dear...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 5, 2008 at 8:41 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sam my dearest friend.........
i'm glad you loved it my dear......

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 5, 2008 at 8:40 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Troosha dear....
thank you always troosha...we can never loose hope dear...never...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 5, 2008 at 8:39 PM | link to this | reply

Re: elyse my dear....yes...allelluia to light......
thank you so much dear one...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 5, 2008 at 8:38 PM | link to this | reply

Re: yes dearest soul_builder....we are the players...
it's in our hands my dear...they play us...we play back dear...we dont lock ourselves in and honor their cruelty...thank you so much dear soul...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 5, 2008 at 8:36 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Powerfully Stunning...---wigopa my dear...
thank you so much dear....

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 5, 2008 at 8:34 PM | link to this | reply

Re: how are you---writer dear...
thank you dear....always..

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 5, 2008 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sinome dear, we all are children of this world....
how sad can it be to be harmed multiple times by some...but to loose hope is unjust...even our dreams our clinging to that only one positive 'arena'...'hope'...if it's the last thing we have to do...thank you dear one...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 5, 2008 at 8:32 PM | link to this | reply

My dear Mermaid,  you have outdone yourself, there is so much feeling and hurt in this beautiful poem.  You are so sweet and beautiful, it is almost shocking you should know about such horrors, who would dare to soil an angel, and you are right my love, there are too many angels out there suffering right now.  It is all our collective shame, it should be our pain, and our responsibility to do something, anything to stop it.  Take care of you my sweet,  and don't be sad 

posted by Sinome on March 5, 2008 at 6:32 PM | link to this | reply

How are you
bravo encore bravo beautiful work

posted by Thomas_Cornish on March 5, 2008 at 2:06 PM | link to this | reply

Powerfully Stunning...
I had to say this is a very well written poem. It blew me away and made me think how many times i have met something head on and then was able to continue on. There was always hope throughout. A masterpiece of art. Loved it.

posted by Wigopa_ on March 5, 2008 at 11:36 AM | link to this | reply

I think you described the injustice beautifully. I guess we are 'playing' in another's playing field! Our own would have a different outcome!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on March 5, 2008 at 11:30 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful ~ potent and powerful sweet Purple.  Allelluia for that light beyond. ~Elyse

posted by elysianfields on March 5, 2008 at 11:12 AM | link to this | reply

Purple
That's quite the social statement but one that did not lack hope.....

posted by Troosha on March 5, 2008 at 9:46 AM | link to this | reply

The imagery blew me away! I loved it so very much! sam

posted by sam444 on March 5, 2008 at 9:17 AM | link to this | reply

well said..

posted by star4sky5 on March 5, 2008 at 8:33 AM | link to this | reply

This Should Be Dedicated To The World
My favorites..."On a plate of terror" and "We have reasons to exist"

posted by Color_Your_Life on March 5, 2008 at 8:14 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Nice!---kayzzaman dear welcome back...
i'm doing fine my dear thank you...nice to hear from you again...thank you...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 5, 2008 at 6:42 AM | link to this | reply

Nice!
I am back dear. How are you?

posted by Kayzzaman on March 5, 2008 at 5:24 AM | link to this | reply

Re: What can I say?---mariaki dear.....thank you so much...
you are always sweet dear...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on March 5, 2008 at 4:37 AM | link to this | reply

What can I say?
wonderful? excellent? superb? all of this and words are not enough!  I absolutely adored this piece my dear mermaid; may there always be light in your life and endless love in your heart my friend; thank you very much and God bless you

posted by mariaki on March 5, 2008 at 4:00 AM | link to this | reply