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Sam ~
As always, I appreciate your comments very much. I truly admire your writing. Thank you!
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 24, 2008 at 11:48 PM
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saul_relative ~
All things must come to an end -- ...and in this case, there was no more to write. I was only an observer; the butterflies continued their own story. So, in reality, their story did not end, just the record of my observation. ~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 24, 2008 at 11:41 PM
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Dave ~
I really appreciate your encouraging comments. Thank you! ~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 24, 2008 at 11:33 PM
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wana_phils ~
Thank you for your comment and for visiting my blog. I hope you will come again. ~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 24, 2008 at 11:30 PM
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such beautiful words!!!
posted by
wana_phils
on February 24, 2008 at 3:49 PM
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This is a very beautiful poem! Indeed, it stands out as the best I have read today! The depth of perception is astounding!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on February 24, 2008 at 12:51 PM
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Entertaining and well done, SoulSpeaker. However, something bothers
me about the end. The finality of it. It's probably just me; I have my own problems with closures and endings and finishes. Probably why I waited until I was 44 to get married...
posted by
saul_relative
on February 24, 2008 at 10:18 AM
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An astounding portrayal of imagery. I so adore it when a poet takes what they and gives to us all in wonderfully organized array of the beauty in nature! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 24, 2008 at 8:25 AM
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back again to returning the visit
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on February 24, 2008 at 7:28 AM
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Shanlizer ~
Thank you for your comment -- and you're welcome! ...Second life? Info. ~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 24, 2008 at 7:12 AM
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BEautiful
Thanks for dropping by :) Ever thought about a Second life? Virtual sytle. Hit me up if you have a desire :)
posted by
Shanlizer88
on February 24, 2008 at 6:58 AM
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Purple ~
The piece now has
two beautiful butterflies. Thank you!
~
SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 24, 2008 at 5:51 AM
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Purple ~
Thank you for your comment ....and for sharing. ~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 24, 2008 at 5:45 AM
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soulspearker you fly so beautifully high dear.........
i love the flow of your rhythm dear soul...it's so swift....
here's my purple share dear one to add to your beautiful piece...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on February 24, 2008 at 5:30 AM
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writerspirit ~
You're welcome! I enjoy your writing.
~
SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 24, 2008 at 5:26 AM
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thank for leaving a comment to today's entry
The imagery of this piece is beautiful
posted by
Thomas_Cornish
on February 24, 2008 at 5:16 AM
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7stars ~
Thank you. I'm so glad you like it!
~
SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 24, 2008 at 4:18 AM
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very nice....
posted by
star4sky5
on February 24, 2008 at 3:58 AM
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Serena ~
Thank you, so very much, for your comments. I really appreciate them. ...and I wish you the best, also. ~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 24, 2008 at 2:27 AM
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Wow. This is really breathtaking. I'm glad I found you. Your poem has a gentle flow and it is smooth. I can feel warmth coming from your work-it comes across strongly in the way you describe the butterfly. You really treasure and value it.
Best wishes from Serena
posted by
Tiddlypush
on February 24, 2008 at 2:16 AM
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Sinome ~
Thank you very much -- butterflies are my favorite, too!
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 24, 2008 at 2:12 AM
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Re: Nothing short of pure beauty...
Thank you, Elyse, for your kind comment. ~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 24, 2008 at 2:10 AM
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Nothing short of pure beauty...
and your words are elegantly poised~graceful as the 'butterfly'. Makes this reader want to dance ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 23, 2008 at 10:25 PM
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Beautiful sweet poem. Butterflies are my favorite kindred spirits, I love them, and I loved your words. :-)
posted by
Sinome
on February 23, 2008 at 9:56 PM
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Thank you, lestate!
~
SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on February 23, 2008 at 8:19 PM
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that's nice!!!!
posted by
lestate7
on February 23, 2008 at 8:16 PM
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