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yes, it's all......

posted by star4sky5 on February 23, 2008 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

have to agree with Ely...lol Majik, you brilliant...making something raw sound so passionate...loved it.

*raven*

posted by polarcontradict on February 20, 2008 at 11:03 PM | link to this | reply

Now this is passion ~
Enjoyed the read. ~Ely

posted by elysianfields on February 20, 2008 at 1:27 PM | link to this | reply

Passionate and precise!!!

posted by EX_TURPI on February 19, 2008 at 11:52 AM | link to this | reply

Intense imagery!  sam

posted by sam444 on February 19, 2008 at 10:32 AM | link to this | reply

Very cleverly worded & meaningful ! - Ash

posted by ash_pradhan on February 19, 2008 at 7:21 AM | link to this | reply

Profound and powerful !

posted by afzal50 on February 19, 2008 at 7:07 AM | link to this | reply

Very beautifuly written...
A poem I can actually understand and feel the whole way...

posted by tyleness on February 19, 2008 at 6:42 AM | link to this | reply

Awesome!
alive and passionate; very well done my friend

posted by mariaki on February 19, 2008 at 6:37 AM | link to this | reply

blood for love.........deep nightmajik dear...........
i feel for this piece really dear... God Bless You,Bless,swing

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on February 19, 2008 at 6:19 AM | link to this | reply