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Good post.
posted by
Oosthuizen
on December 2, 2007 at 7:17 AM
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I like the metaphors of the last stanza. Very fitting.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on November 30, 2007 at 3:11 PM
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Beautiful Thing......
posted by
star4sky5
on November 30, 2007 at 6:23 AM
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WRONG!
THAT'S NOT! LOVE. Listening?
posted by
Sudanym_
on November 29, 2007 at 9:17 PM
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posted by
saul_relative
on November 29, 2007 at 3:20 PM
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VERY IMAGINATIVE AND THE WORD PLACEMENT IS OUTSTANDING. FROM TOP TO BOTTOM THE FLOW WAS OUTSTANDING. I REALLY ENJOYED THIS READ!! SAM
posted by
sam444
on November 29, 2007 at 4:30 AM
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posted by
afzal50
on November 29, 2007 at 1:49 AM
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So well said, my friend...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on November 28, 2007 at 11:06 PM
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True
all of it.
posted by
cpklapper
on November 28, 2007 at 9:46 PM
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