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posted by
star4sky5
on December 4, 2007 at 7:59 PM
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Re: Re: Re: the plural of leaf is leaves. not leafs.
Thank you .. now thats what i'm talking about ..
posted by
Angesom_AG
on November 28, 2007 at 4:28 PM
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Re: Re: the plural of leaf is leaves. not leafs.
I think it is a solid thing to feel like a tree, and to put your mind into what it is to be a tree, with leaves that flicker. Your point of view, as expressed by this and other poems, is unique and yet in some ways "everyman" in that we can identify with what you're saying.
Keep writing!!! :)pat
posted by
Pat_B
on November 28, 2007 at 4:21 PM
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I must check out your versatile artistry - music man and rap star fr Africa
i love short poems--this is so effective. Stick with these styles (every now and then); Ilove myown shorter poems. Influence of Emily Dickinson, my beloved, but dead a 100 years ago. Poor me---shalom
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on November 27, 2007 at 5:44 PM
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very nice piece
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on November 27, 2007 at 10:34 AM
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A beautiful drop of Zen.
posted by
BuddhaDemon
on November 27, 2007 at 9:08 AM
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So few words, so much meaning !
posted by
ash_pradhan
on November 27, 2007 at 8:53 AM
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Re: the plural of leaf is leaves. not leafs.
Thanks .. i'll edit it right now .. but that doesnt say anything about your thoughts on the poem?
posted by
Angesom_AG
on November 27, 2007 at 8:41 AM
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the plural of leaf is leaves. not leafs.
posted by
Pat_B
on November 27, 2007 at 8:36 AM
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Isn't that the truth.........
posted by
Troosha
on November 27, 2007 at 8:18 AM
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Well written ! Powerful style !
posted by
afzal50
on November 27, 2007 at 6:47 AM
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Angesom . . . all I can offer is what richinstore has stated. The poem stands as is.
joab
posted by
joab1
on November 27, 2007 at 6:40 AM
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Angesom
short, precise and sweet.
posted by
richinstore
on November 27, 2007 at 6:31 AM
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