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posted by
FineYoungSinger
on November 27, 2007 at 8:41 AM
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Thanks for reading
Max
posted by
contagion_publishing
on November 27, 2007 at 2:03 AM
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THAT WAS AN ABSOLUTELY AWESOME AND WONDERFUL READ!!!!!!!!!!!! SAM
posted by
sam444
on November 26, 2007 at 9:43 PM
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posted by
MiaElla
on November 26, 2007 at 5:13 PM
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Your imagery is excellent, Kayzzaman. Poignant, a bit sad.
posted by
saul_relative
on November 26, 2007 at 3:14 PM
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Re: DON'T WANT TO BE LIKE THAT........Kyzzaman,I was looking at my
comment, I am sorry that I was thinking to write something else and made a mistake.....
sorry....
sue9457
posted by
star4sky5
on November 26, 2007 at 10:36 AM
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Kayzzaman
From your words I picture a portrate of a genteel lady with an enigmatic expression on her countenance and noticible concentration lines etched upon her brow. Very good description.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 26, 2007 at 10:32 AM
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DON'T WANT TO BE LIKE THAT........
posted by
star4sky5
on November 26, 2007 at 7:01 AM
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Hello
I really enjoyed reading your work! Very intense and moving.
posted by
akaWildfire
on November 26, 2007 at 6:41 AM
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Well done
Thanks for sharing
posted by
mariaki
on November 26, 2007 at 6:34 AM
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Beautiful , profound , and touching !
posted by
afzal50
on November 26, 2007 at 6:34 AM
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hmmmm
interesting.... have good day... ..keep smiling...
posted by
whiteknight3128
on November 26, 2007 at 6:12 AM
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Kazzyaman:
Not so short; but the presentation makes it so.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on November 26, 2007 at 5:53 AM
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kayz
excellent.
posted by
richinstore
on November 26, 2007 at 5:33 AM
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Your Poetry
You certainly have a beautiful way with words, I fear my poetry does not nearly compare.
posted by
angelink
on November 26, 2007 at 5:05 AM
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