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- Go to attACKing the yACK but the yACK has some flACK
thank you taps - your words are wonderful - thank you
posted by
chrisja
on November 4, 2007 at 7:48 AM
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chrisja
We have a lot of creative writers around here and you are definitely one of them. I'm sure that .dave. will love it. I think that someone is still sending him the posts that are about him in some way. Great fun you gave us here!
posted by
TAPS.
on November 4, 2007 at 7:40 AM
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thanks brian - thanks for stopping by - cheers
posted by
chrisja
on November 4, 2007 at 5:00 AM
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LOL
It's priceless! I'm sure .Dave would gave you at least 100 points in the jackdaw game for a poem like that!
posted by
Brian76
on November 4, 2007 at 4:27 AM
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Night. Thanks, Chris, it was fun.
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 6:06 PM
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Keep Living For The Whole Life
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 6:05 PM
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anyhow - it's way (way) past the witching hour (what is the witching hour?
I'll have to check that!) - I don't know what I'll post tomorrow, but perhaps we'll catch up again then - ciao for now
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 6:03 PM
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KEEP LIFE FOR THE LIVING, ON BOTH SIDES OF THE (W)HOLE
(sorry - I'm not shouting - it's a proclamation!)
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 5:57 PM
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Good point. Like you said below, the whole situation has sparked some
good poetry. I am NOT going to say .Dave would have wanted it that way, because he's not dead, for fACK's sake. Sorry, I've been hearing that a lot lately. He can see the comments, just not posts.
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 5:45 PM
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Re: Done. I hope you don't mind I used your phrase?
how can i mind when my last post was a big bounce of my own off stuff of yours and our conversations
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 5:42 PM
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Done. I hope you don't mind I used your phrase?
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 5:38 PM
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you will post it won't you?
or did you? i haven't checked - (i will now)
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 5:37 PM
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Yes, I just wrote while you were gone, and no, I can't get the dancer to
rotate the other way either. I thought it was my eyes, maybe it's a neurological thing like Mysteria said. I'm definitely right-brained, free-associative, intuitive dominant, although like you said the other day I can be left-brained when I need to.
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 5:31 PM
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Re: Maelstrom - wow did u just write this
- i've just come back from mysteria - yes i like it - good recommend, thanx - but i got hypnotised by the turning dancer - i can't believe it rotates different ways for different people - there was no way i could get it going the other way, or even close - is there some trick that i'm not noticing?
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 5:26 PM
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Maelstrom of discontent", I like that.
The maelstrom of discontent
a whirling, swirliing vortex
of disharmony, disenchantment
disillusionment, disdain, and
dare I say it?
disgust
although seeming lightless
a black hole
grasping light
from which nothing
emits or returns
somewhere in the abyss
someone watches
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 5:18 PM
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Ok i posted it - off it goes into the maelstrom of discontent
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 5:13 PM
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And when you get back, here's a blog you might enjoy
Try surfboarding over this. It's in journal. It's Mysteria's blog, little shorts with a little science , pictures, conundrums, light but with substance
http://www.blogit.com/Blogs/Blog.aspx/mysteria/
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 4:51 PM
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Yep, you got it right
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 4:47 PM
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also - one more question (sorry) - is it Dave Cryer? is that his name?
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 4:43 PM
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Okey-dokey, see ya
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 4:43 PM
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i read the vogue post - thanx - yes it is a good read - it keeps momentum
- i wish my problems were that easily solved
- i'll go across to the town hall and post my thing - thanx
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 4:41 PM
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Um,I haven't been getting too deeply into the archives, just staying in
comments and new posts, socializing mostly.
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 4:28 PM
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I think it's now in the Town Hall section, which, although I've read that some posts and comments are being deleted, seems to be the spot people are posting their letters of appeal, etc. to Blogit about .Dave.
You'll find it on the Home page in the upper right hand corner, go to Community, and then look for Town Hall. Thanks for doing that. I don't want to act like the "voice of Dave" or anything, but he's aware and appreciates the support.
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 4:27 PM
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actually - it is quite late here so i want things that are a bit different
that i can snowboard across quite easily - i like it when there's a bit experimentation and individuality
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 4:26 PM
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Here's a story by Vogue that I liked. It's a little long, but I think it's worth it.
http://www.blogit.com/Blogs/Blog.aspx/vogue5582/
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 4:24 PM
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also - i have a question
i've penned something that i want to have added to the stuff people have sent the blog owners requesting that they reverse their decision - you or someone listed somewhere where these could be sent - can you tell me?
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 4:23 PM
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I was just over in fiction, let me look again, do you want links?
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 4:21 PM
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i've only browsed the poetry so far
but i'm open to other suggestions
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 4:20 PM
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In what category?
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 4:18 PM
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can you point me to anything you've read that you like
i thought singer's epic was quite amazing
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 4:15 PM
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Chris, yep, just flitting around, I've got other screens open.
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 4:09 PM
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Re: Hey, who you calling a piece of work? LOL.
zena - you're bACK - you guys are making me blush
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 4:00 PM
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Re: You have really crACKed something here
it was fun azur
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 3:59 PM
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Re: sACKre bleu!!
thank you singer - heaps
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 3:58 PM
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You have really crACKed something here
posted by
Azur
on November 3, 2007 at 3:55 PM
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Hey, who you calling a piece of work? LOL.
It is inspired, isn't it? I told him this morning that if there's an ACKers hall of fame, he's in it for sure. This should go into the annals of ACKerdom, for posterity.
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 3:54 PM
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sACKre bleu!!
This was a fantastACK piece of work!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on November 3, 2007 at 3:51 PM
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the product of self imposed creative restrictions and interesting chats
with zena are the culprits Kayzzaman
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 11:08 AM
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Strange way of writing.
posted by
Kayzzaman
on November 3, 2007 at 10:31 AM
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thank u EX_TURPI
but i have to say the story is real, the symbols are incidental
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 9:29 AM
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An adept use of symbols.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on November 3, 2007 at 8:53 AM
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thanx rich
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 7:54 AM
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chrisja
posted by
richinstore
on November 3, 2007 at 7:53 AM
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thank u whiteknight - the same
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 7:51 AM
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When you're on a roll, you're on a roll
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 7:46 AM
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hmmmm
nice twist... and twist and twist.... lol Have a good day...
posted by
whiteknight3128
on November 3, 2007 at 7:44 AM
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by the way
"...ackanot, ack, ack, ack ack, ackanot take this anyore." -
excellent stuttering i love it
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 7:44 AM
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I know the free associations just ACK on on and on
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 7:28 AM
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thank you msiieur antonionioni (wow - u hav to put the last 'u' on
otherwise u get 'onion' on the end!) i'm glad you enjoyed it
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 7:26 AM
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Re: How did you manage to touch this hard topic ?
afzal, i think the Dave thing is stirring a lot of energy so the poetry is flying
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 7:22 AM
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Re: LOL, Chris, if there is an ACKers hall of fame, you're in. UnequivACKably
i had to put the brakes on this one, it was carrying me away, there's other stuff i wanted to round it off with playing with 'syntACKtical quACKery for the almanACK of my non-ACKtual yACKery' - perhaps i'll finish it later - or never
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 7:18 AM
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ACKtually, I don't think this is funny at all.
It's bloody hilarious!
posted by
Antonionioni
on November 3, 2007 at 7:17 AM
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How did you manage to touch this hard topic ?
posted by
afzal50
on November 3, 2007 at 7:11 AM
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LOL, Chris, if there is an ACKers hall of fame, you're in. UnequivACKably
Sackerdotally is my favorite. Good to make poetry out of aggravation, isn't it?
posted by
Zena77
on November 3, 2007 at 7:06 AM
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