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Hi sweet boy... always defending my honor it seems.
I loved this, it's reminiscent of the garbage can days.  You taught me so much about writing poetry without even knowing it.  I hope you keep up trying to submit.  I've always loved them so much because your style is like no one else.  Thanks for the head's up and the kind word. W

posted by Temple on December 12, 2006 at 12:13 AM | link to this | reply

Wendi is a sweet girl and a friend of mine.

posted by FreeManWalking on December 11, 2006 at 5:40 AM | link to this | reply

Right now, BP, I really, really, really wish you were still in Bremerton
I can't get my boyffriend to leave

posted by Blanche. on December 11, 2006 at 3:20 AM | link to this | reply

I just snapped a few photos of Bremerton, you're old naval station, to post
must get camera to Rite-aid, it's just up the street. It'll be done in a couple hours.  Stand by.

posted by Blanche. on December 10, 2006 at 6:09 PM | link to this | reply

Nashville, right in the middle

posted by FreeManWalking on December 8, 2006 at 5:58 AM | link to this | reply

I'm so embarrassed...
I thought the picture had be painted just fine.......that was Eastern Tennessee, I take it?  

posted by Corbin_Dallas on December 8, 2006 at 5:47 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks but I still wish I'd snapped one. I think it was the steeple...

posted by FreeManWalking on December 8, 2006 at 5:45 AM | link to this | reply

Arguuuh! One little word changes everything, doesn't it?
There certainly was "NO" need for a photo insert.....

posted by Corbin_Dallas on December 8, 2006 at 5:43 AM | link to this | reply

I should have it was worth remembering

posted by FreeManWalking on December 8, 2006 at 5:42 AM | link to this | reply

There certainly was a need for
a photo insert.......

posted by Corbin_Dallas on December 8, 2006 at 5:40 AM | link to this | reply

You paint quite a lovely picture with your words.

posted by Passionflower on December 7, 2006 at 9:37 AM | link to this | reply

great poem!

posted by Amanda__ on December 7, 2006 at 8:09 AM | link to this | reply

The sun made a dramatic exit

posted by Blanche. on December 5, 2006 at 2:13 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks TAPS for sharing the family history. I'm reading a book right now
that tells how Andrew Jackson came to these hills where I currently sit from North Carolina.  Its a larger book than I usually read but I'm in the same town where he lived and is buried so I felt compelled by proximity

posted by FreeManWalking on December 4, 2006 at 2:05 PM | link to this | reply

I love this FreeManWalking.  My ancestors were from Tennessee before and during the Civil War.  I have spent time searching out the places.  They lived in what is now Natchez Trace State Park in a little town no longer there called, Dollar.  They helped to establish a little Missionary Baptist Church there that is still going after all these years and are buried in the little cemetary in the woods across the road from the church.  All except for my great-great grandpa who left TN after the war and made his way to Oklahoma Indian Territory.   Sorry that I went on so.  You got me started with your poem.  LOL

posted by TAPS. on December 4, 2006 at 11:40 AM | link to this | reply

Free
I could picture the sky you speak of. 

posted by Troosha on December 4, 2006 at 9:00 AM | link to this | reply

thanks kat

posted by FreeManWalking on December 4, 2006 at 7:08 AM | link to this | reply

Free

posted by Kat02 on December 4, 2006 at 7:04 AM | link to this | reply

thanks afzal

posted by FreeManWalking on December 4, 2006 at 6:24 AM | link to this | reply

Good poem.

posted by afzal50 on December 4, 2006 at 6:19 AM | link to this | reply

thanks allyk...it looked just like that

posted by FreeManWalking on December 4, 2006 at 6:14 AM | link to this | reply

Very descriptive!!

posted by allyk on December 4, 2006 at 6:13 AM | link to this | reply