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posted by teddypoet52 on November 6, 2014 at 1:53 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Teddy. I especially like the idea of hair raising.
I hope this day finds you well.

posted by Schatz on October 16, 2006 at 9:28 AM | link to this | reply

Well-done, my friend...
Why is it some people listen to you
treating the experience as if it were
some kind of test?
why is it , when you have something to say
the hearing portals around you
become empty with a fullness
drowning away your every utterance?
Doormats wear away with the dust
the Heart remains
perhaps people are unable to appreciate
that you really are listening
to their smallest detail
(therein lies the question, why do they
continue to share words
with someone who is invisible to them?...)
Perhaps those who you really want to
talk to you, have nothing beyond their own
trials, to share with you...Good Morning/Evening;
I Love You, Be safe, Sweet Dreams
are beyond the scope of their understanding...
the churchmice, perhaps stepping on a few tails
would liven them up a hair?
Let them be the ones to fly the flags, my friend
their sound soon drifts into the orbiting winds
whereas the countenance of solid people
such as yourself
will continue in compassion's sweet mix
of appreciation shown and indifference practically gift-wrapped
in return for your kindnesses.
                                 

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on October 16, 2006 at 2:38 AM | link to this | reply

lots to think about....

posted by -blackcat on September 25, 2006 at 2:38 PM | link to this | reply

This is life.
It's frustrating, but it's all there is. Well said.

posted by Antonionioni on September 25, 2006 at 2:31 PM | link to this | reply

Very nicely done

posted by Kat02 on September 25, 2006 at 2:18 PM | link to this | reply

posted by NAJWA on September 25, 2006 at 2:16 PM | link to this | reply