Dave's Classic Haiku and Fauxtrains: HERE WE GO WITH RAINBOWS, I KNOW YOU KNOW I LOVE RAINBOWS

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Tuesday, August 1, 2006

HERE WE GO WITH RAINBOWS, I KNOW YOU KNOW I LOVE RAINBOWS

seven little colors splash across the sky making God’s huge bright sunlight arch from cloud to cloud rainbow’s bright glory from God promise to His own rainbow in the mist painting colors through the sky nature’s bright palette teardrops from heaven rainbow soaring cross the sky brighten dismal day... Sign in to see full entry.

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I admire the Japanese culture more than any other culture in the world. Their strict adherence to cultural traits and their own personal self-discipline leave me ashamed of my own shortcomings, which are many. However, I feel like I do have an ability to write meaningful Haiku and am disappointed with the many writers of "Haiku" which depart from the traditional "5-7-5" format. Here are some of my works for your enjoyment. Fauxtrains are a poetic style I created myself by accident, thinking I was writing Quatrains. Not sure how I made the error but I like it. They are similar to Haiku in that it is a strict format, eight lines, syllable count of 2-4-6-8-6-4-2 and no punctuation or capitolization. However, Subject matter is completely open, whereas Haiku is supposed to be strictly about nature with no human element! Try it and send me your efforts!

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