Dave's Classic Haiku and Fauxtrains: MORE RAINY DAY TIDBITS INSPIRED BY THE LATE STORM!

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Tuesday, June 20, 2006

MORE RAINY DAY TIDBITS INSPIRED BY THE LATE STORM!

Smell the summer rain As it filters the hot air Everything looks fresh I don’t mind walking Under gentle spring showers They bring new flowers Soft rolling thunder Gently falling summer rain Running through the grass This storm is awesome Not only is it really loud It smells good also Raining and... Sign in to see full entry.

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I admire the Japanese culture more than any other culture in the world. Their strict adherence to cultural traits and their own personal self-discipline leave me ashamed of my own shortcomings, which are many. However, I feel like I do have an ability to write meaningful Haiku and am disappointed with the many writers of "Haiku" which depart from the traditional "5-7-5" format. Here are some of my works for your enjoyment. Fauxtrains are a poetic style I created myself by accident, thinking I was writing Quatrains. Not sure how I made the error but I like it. They are similar to Haiku in that it is a strict format, eight lines, syllable count of 2-4-6-8-6-4-2 and no punctuation or capitolization. However, Subject matter is completely open, whereas Haiku is supposed to be strictly about nature with no human element! Try it and send me your efforts!

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