Briar Prose: fiction and poetry for Friday, July 11, 2008

Friday, July 11, 2008

Salaah: Finale! (2nd half 15 & 16)

(Note: I'm a writer, not an artist...Salaah resembles Maribel Verdu, the gorgeous spanish actress) MA 15(continued...) The Man is standing in the doorway, and Kat’s knees knock. “Salaah?...Salaah?” She calls out, as her predator’s jaw clenches and his eyes glimmer in rage. He begins to move forward.... Sign in to see full entry.

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Salaah part 14 & 15(of 16): The Bird & The Bear

Sal aah in the Cav e 14 When a little bird hops into Kat’s sight, she wonders if it is Salaah. “Yes,” the bird twitters, “it is me.” Does the man always leave the door to the panel room unlocked? “I created it with no lock.” You made this place, Salaah? “Only as he wished it. But he did not specify... Sign in to see full entry.

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