Discombobulated's Poetry

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Saturday, January 27, 2007

Poem: Vittorio....

I wrote this years and years ago about someone who's still special to me. Vittorio.... 8/5/96 My angel, my guardian crafted of love, Why must this be? That you should be so cruelly betrayed, While you are the light of the world to me? Why must it be you, To feel such sharp pain? Why must it be you... Sign in to see full entry.

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Dates on my poems

Should mention that the dates on my poems are day first, month second. Living in New Zealand I've had to adjust to that, so I try to stick to it. Also, it's a habit of mine to insert the date into my poems. I've been doing that for donkey's years.... Sign in to see full entry.

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An "oops"

I went and posted a TON of poems when I first got on here today so, for those who are interested in the rest, they're kinda, um, buried at the bottom of the pile from when I first started post. Sign in to see full entry.

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Poem: Those who leave

Those who leave 28/1/07 Some come and want to sweep me away. Those are the ones who leave. Some are as cold and constant as stone. Those are the ones who stay. I want my blood to flow, but I want you to stay. Sign in to see full entry.

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Poem: Shiva

Shiva 24/6/06 Pull me up to your heavens Lift me from the water Naked and swooning Lift my body from the bed And impale me. Sign in to see full entry.

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Online relationships

I'm giving myself a headache by staying on the computer but dammit, I can't walk away! I'd like to come up with one good, interesting thought that'll maybe lead to some sort of revelation or "Aha!" moment. Just read a blog entry from someone looking for a relationship, someone with very particular... Sign in to see full entry.

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Poem: The awakening, part two

The awakening, part two 28/1/07 A spell cast But never completed. Life grinds to a halt mental anguish remains confusion, disbelief. Regret. Last convulsions Heart, creaks and groans then slows to a whisper. Lying dormant again… never daring to hope To be awakened. Again. Sign in to see full entry.

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Poem: The awakening

The awakening 14/6/06 Unlocking the crypt He enters my grave Casting aside the cobwebs Tearing my burial shroud Wiping the dust from my eyelids Hands on my stone flesh His soul enters my lips A bloody kiss Awakening me With an electrifying start My eyes are open My life can begin Sign in to see full entry.

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Further to "Those days are gone I think"

Didn't mean for this blog to be about anything more than poetry but oops, oh well. Further to the earlier post, I will be 29 this year, which is kinda ancient on the internet. If that is why it's hard for me to read the pages and pages of poetry out there, then I'm not looking forward to getting any... Sign in to see full entry.

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Finally, I've got the right expression!

I'm out of my depth, THAT'S what I'm feeling this morning. The following thing I'm about to say shouldn't be relevant but apparently my brain thinks it is. I keep thinking of Johnny Depp in "Pirates of the Caribbean: Dead Man's Chest", specifically the scene in which he says, "I feel sullied and... Sign in to see full entry.

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Poetry intended to relieve the dissonance in my head and my heart, but meant to be read by others, as poetry just for myself isn't cutting it for me anymore. I'm taking the plunge, and looking for feedback. And wondering if there's anybody out there.

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