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I desperatly need your help
Hi,
It will be interesting to see just what you do write.
Tom
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posted by
psi-kick
on April 1, 2003 at 2:48 AM
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The word "for."
It's a non-fiction book about Hawaiian temples (heiau), where they are, and what they were used for. It's a non-fiction book about Hawaiian temples (heiau), where they are, and what they were used for.
I should not have ended the sentence with the word "for." It would have been better if I had said "...where they are and their uses." Or something along those lines.
posted by
Jemmie211
on March 24, 2003 at 12:39 PM
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What was so disgusting?
That sentence looked fine to me.
posted by
editormum
on March 24, 2003 at 12:31 PM
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Thanks, Jemmie!
First of all, your title reminded me (in all seriousness) of football. I hereby invoke the spirit of the late Walter Payton to assist you in meeting your goals (and I hope you're not a Green Bay Packer fan!).
Finally, thanks for posting your goal. I got this from a small writers' ezine, which suggested that writing about your goals can be of immense help to clarify those goals.
Thanks again!
posted by
kidnykid
on March 24, 2003 at 7:01 AM
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