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It is different and well thought out. Good luck.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 8, 2021 at 7:47 AM
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Re: Very interesting. Who is maguey?
maguey is cactus
posted by
Annicita
on May 8, 2021 at 7:16 AM
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Very interesting. Who is maguey?
posted by
Pat_B
on May 8, 2021 at 3:45 AM
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Re: Oops! Eeeiii! This phone! Rrhh!
Should read: Probably a typo so excuse me for mentioning it.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 7, 2021 at 7:35 PM
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It’s fabulous! I love the way you have written it and arranged it with the tyoe in the corresponding colors. One thing, and it might just be a typo, I don’t know - but it might be stronger if you said “...sentence of death...“ or “...sentenced to death...” Brobsblyna tyoobso excuse me for mentioning it. Great job.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 7, 2021 at 7:34 PM
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Good Evening
Annicita, I love it! I think it's amazing!
posted by
Goldiec
on May 7, 2021 at 4:54 PM
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