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yes pretty weird i know but i love to experiment with different forms just for fun and to see how it sounds
thanks all
posted by
poetjpb
on February 17, 2004 at 8:29 PM
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Good detail, on the dark side, macabre, I hate worms EEWW!
posted by
FoxyBlue
on February 17, 2004 at 7:19 AM
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I loved that last line.
Great imagery.
posted by
Lodestar
on February 17, 2004 at 3:57 AM
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well i guess i can see it from a man's view
now you are worrying me--hahahahahah
posted by
poetjpb
on February 16, 2004 at 9:58 AM
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poetjpb,
think I need to see a therapist again, found that sexy.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 16, 2004 at 8:55 AM
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THANKS
IT WAS A FEEBLE ATTEMPT TO IMITATE THEODORE RHOETHKE AND AN EXPERIMENT.
I like to try different kinds of poetry to stretch my brain...........
posted by
poetjpb
on February 15, 2004 at 11:19 PM
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nifty!
I love cute little blurbs like that! I think they really filter out the extra creative energy-- ya know?
posted by
JustJilly
on February 15, 2004 at 9:56 PM
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