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Re: adnohr
adnohr I delicately did not explain further into the reason behind my decision. The path to Paradise is sometimes sensually foreboding.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 17, 2018 at 9:52 AM
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I laughed too when reading the end of the poem. Then I read FSI's comment and saw it in another light. Now I'm wondering if a little bravery would have made it a happier ending? I do hope the lady finally managed to get her boiler fixed!
posted by
adnohr
on December 17, 2018 at 1:15 AM
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Re: Pat
Well it has been raining almost continuously so it has not been really cold. No it would have been a brave man to call opposite the Dragon.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 16, 2018 at 11:46 AM
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Re: Bill
Yes indeed Bill,I never thought of that.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 16, 2018 at 11:43 AM
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Re: Kabu
Goodness Kabu I could have done with one or two hints once. Keep smiling.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 16, 2018 at 11:42 AM
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Re: FS
You have it in one FS. Cheers.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 16, 2018 at 11:40 AM
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My grandmother's phone number used to be similar to a cable company's. She used to get a lot of calls all the time.
The isolation felt at the end of your poem really strikes me. The pain of isolation is very real.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 16, 2018 at 4:46 AM
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oh dear your poetry makes me laugh, so much about a young man trying to step out with a young lady but finding that they all want more than he is willing to give..
posted by
Kabu
on December 15, 2018 at 1:48 PM
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The plumber could call you about that sir. LOL
posted by
BC-A
on December 15, 2018 at 1:38 PM
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The "ironically" caught my eye right away, and then I read the
paragraph and decided no other word would fit the situation. I could laugh about it as long as I was certain your own toes and nose are warm in the faltering of your own heat source. Can't go down that road? Perfect ending. 
posted by
Pat_B
on December 15, 2018 at 10:48 AM
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