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Re: Re: Aba brother

It's the one posted right after this that I that I sorta liked myself. LOL. Been a long day here, though this one's okay. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 10, 2017 at 9:30 PM | link to this | reply

Re: JessieE/

Thank you. You are right, I think everyone does need that. Sorry I missed answering your comment until now. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 10, 2017 at 9:27 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Aba brother

Aba dear, I am so glad you enjoyed this. It made me happy to hear the edit was cleaner. Many, many thanks. I like this one myself a little. LOL. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 10, 2017 at 9:26 PM | link to this | reply

Oh dear sister

The harbour of his storm, wow, howdya-duit?ed it to my fill!

posted by anib on November 10, 2017 at 8:57 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Kabu

Wiley is good one day or for half a day and then his mind slips or his body lets him down so basically no changes thatk you dear. You write in your poetry our story I guess because we are blessed with real love and respect for each other.

posted by Kabu on November 8, 2017 at 2:23 PM | link to this | reply

She..was his lil corner of the boxing ring.. to assess, reassess, recharge..come out swinging. Everyone needs that port in the storm. Nice

posted by JessieE on November 8, 2017 at 9:18 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Don't know how that happens. How is Wiley, dear? 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 7, 2017 at 9:54 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Yes, seems like. Thank you.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 7, 2017 at 9:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Yes, it could be a soldier's poem. Thank you. You've got that right! I didn't ever think of writing a Dear John poem! Now that's different! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 7, 2017 at 9:53 PM | link to this | reply

awww how wonderful and still writing about us I see my darling S. Sister.

posted by Kabu on November 7, 2017 at 11:30 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful it is that they were there for one another.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 7, 2017 at 9:09 AM | link to this | reply

This could even be a poem for time in war RP. As long as she doesn't write a Dear John letter. Of course you are too poetical to think of that scenario. Good writing.

posted by C_C_T on November 7, 2017 at 7:06 AM | link to this | reply