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Re: mariposa75

I'm very pleased that you do. And sorry you are leaving. Thank you and may good things come to you.. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 19, 2017 at 12:10 AM | link to this | reply

I like this poem very much!

posted by mariposa75 on August 18, 2017 at 11:36 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

Wow! Many thanks, Naut! I like that analogy. It's also good to hear, since I had a bit of doubt about this one. Grazie. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 17, 2017 at 8:14 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Thank you, dear S. Sister. What a great thing to hear and such nice words to say. Many thanks for reading and for your sweet comments. I do appreciate them. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 17, 2017 at 8:11 PM | link to this | reply

RP

Magnificent! It reminds me of a piece of rich tapestry...

posted by Nautikos on August 17, 2017 at 8:00 PM | link to this | reply

You are all these things to me when I read your poetry. I am able to imagine all sorts of places and life styles and love.

posted by Kabu on August 17, 2017 at 2:32 PM | link to this | reply

Re:BC-A

Thank you very much, Bill. I appreciate it. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 17, 2017 at 11:11 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

FSI, then perhaps this poem is a small success. You have innately caught the crux of the poem. It is an exercise in 'what if,' as I had challenged myself to write a really nice poem, wondering what it would be like, and this is how it turned out. Thank you very much. Very astute.  

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 17, 2017 at 11:10 AM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

I'm so glad, TAPS! Many thanks. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 17, 2017 at 10:59 AM | link to this | reply

RPresta

And love is just that. Excellent.

posted by BC-A on August 17, 2017 at 10:34 AM | link to this | reply

You express the love felt for the other person so well that the audience who is reading it is rooting for you...I love the what if aspect of your poem.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 17, 2017 at 9:17 AM | link to this | reply

How beautiful.  I love it.

posted by TAPS. on August 17, 2017 at 6:59 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Aba

Mostly in formatting, with a few words here and there. As I said, I didn't know on this one. Or any of them, actually! LOL. Thanks, Aba Brother, very much, for reading and commenting. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 17, 2017 at 1:27 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Wow Aba Brother

Whew! Thank you. I wondered about it, if it was too long. Many, many thanks for telling me such nice compliments. As always, they are much appreciated, L'il Bro. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 17, 2017 at 1:23 AM | link to this | reply

With slight changes from the one you posted earlier

posted by anib on August 16, 2017 at 10:54 PM | link to this | reply

Wow

Wonderful! Superb!! Magnificent!!! Dear sis Presta, what a poem. All. Can say is I am simply overwhelmed 

posted by anib on August 16, 2017 at 10:53 PM | link to this | reply