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I know it's an old one now, but...

better late than never. 

I really liked this one. There's something good vs evil in this poem. 

And at the same time, I thought:

We're human beings, standing in the middle of The Lord and Satan.

posted by kasperhoe on April 22, 2017 at 2:47 PM | link to this | reply

It is the satirical style and the flow that is quite endearing. 

posted by anibanerjee on February 22, 2017 at 9:53 PM | link to this | reply

interesting

 

posted by Annicita on November 17, 2016 at 8:38 PM | link to this | reply

much enjoyed, very well arranged , just a pleasure to read, thanks, and may God bless

posted by Riversidepoet on October 20, 2016 at 7:51 AM | link to this | reply

Sorry, I hope my previous comment about the Toronto Blue Jays did not jinx your winning and staying in the game. 

posted by TAPS. on October 19, 2016 at 4:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu and Naut

I could imagine this set to music going viral on YouTube.

posted by RPresta on October 19, 2016 at 12:21 PM | link to this | reply

Well done Naut, quite an interesting poem. I like something out of the ordinary it stimulates the brain.

posted by C_C_T on October 19, 2016 at 11:02 AM | link to this | reply

Way to go Nautikos. One knows from growing up in the '60's just how effective poetry and music is. This needs to be submitted to a wider audience or sent to a musician to add music to it.

 

posted by Kabu on October 19, 2016 at 7:50 AM | link to this | reply

I like this poem a whole lot, Naut. Great imagery.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 19, 2016 at 6:32 AM | link to this | reply

LOL, and you incorporated even the beard in this Enjoyed this

posted by shobana on October 19, 2016 at 5:28 AM | link to this | reply

How fun.  Son #1 had just stopped in to see if I'd heard anything from my Canada friend whose team was The Blue Jays as he keeps up with them and wanted to wish you gung ho and whoopty do and all that jazz.  So I read him your poem and then we looked up dhimmi as neither of us was familiar with it.  Knowing what that meant did add a lot to the poem.

posted by TAPS. on October 18, 2016 at 8:47 PM | link to this | reply

Nautikos

Sometimes one just can't help what pops into one's mind, and musicality just enhances that! What can I say? :) 

posted by RPresta on October 18, 2016 at 8:12 PM | link to this | reply

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