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Re: shobana
Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you liked it. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 20, 2016 at 11:32 PM
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Yes in the end we see the light - beautiful imagery here.
posted by
shobana
on September 20, 2016 at 9:28 PM
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Re: Re: Nautikos
One way or another, right? 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 9, 2016 at 6:10 PM
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Re: Nautujos
Thank you. Yes, we are. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 9, 2016 at 12:57 AM
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RP
Very beautiful! And ultimately we are light...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 8, 2016 at 10:18 PM
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Re: C_C_T
Life is beautiful, and precious. I am glad you liked the poem. And your mind is forever young. Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 8, 2016 at 4:18 PM
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Re: Kabu
You are welcome, S. Sister. I'm glad you liked it, dear Kabu! It means a lot, coming from you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 8, 2016 at 12:17 PM
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Re: Lanetay
Thank you, Lanetay! I appreciate hearing from you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 8, 2016 at 12:14 PM
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Re: Aba
Thank you once again, Aba! Yes, it is a tale of contrast.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 8, 2016 at 11:57 AM
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Re: FSI
Yes, it does.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 8, 2016 at 11:56 AM
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just when life becomes too much we cross over into the light. I really love your poem about the life span. Thank you S. Sister.
posted by
Kabu
on September 8, 2016 at 10:42 AM
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nice poem the telling of life
posted by
Lanetay
on September 8, 2016 at 8:27 AM
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Well you must have had a very beautiful life RP. Sorry I mean you are having one. I keep thinking everyone is as old as I am. I suppose the brain can keep reasonably young with
perserverance. I like your poem it is easy to understand and hopefully shows that you are a happy girl. 
posted by
C_C_T
on September 8, 2016 at 7:15 AM
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I like FSI's comment. Another beauty of the poem is the contrast of the blackest night set over against the purest and the whitest light giving it a kind of profundity that is immediately magnetic . Well done, Presta.
posted by
anib
on September 8, 2016 at 7:11 AM
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The great news is that the light will always return after the night.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 8, 2016 at 5:33 AM
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