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Pat
Uh oh! This is already grippingly macabre, and promising to get worse - and damn well written...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 6, 2016 at 11:47 AM
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reminds me of an Australian true story I once read called "The Monster in the bedroom." Write on this is great.
posted by
Kabu
on February 6, 2016 at 9:25 AM
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Perhaps he will think it over and make her a wooden leg. A bit creepy Pat.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 6, 2016 at 7:40 AM
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PatB
This seems to be shaping up as a nasty business but so well written I can'twait for more. Bring it on Sis.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 6, 2016 at 6:22 AM
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