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Lovely poem..... and did you ever think that, taken as a snapshot, one cannot tell if it is a sunrise or sunset, but we automatically assume it is one or the other. Our choice reveals our outlook on life.
posted by
GoldenMean
on December 10, 2015 at 4:20 AM
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Very nice...and interesting; I've always thought of those two moments as daily kisses between the sun and the earth....but I am watching earth and sun, not sun and water.
posted by
Krisles
on December 7, 2015 at 7:38 PM
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Weathered Comforts
Excellent poetry in my mind.
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 7, 2015 at 5:16 PM
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Beautiful writing. I don't know why it took me so long to find your blogs.
posted by
Justi
on December 7, 2015 at 3:43 PM
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Vivid and effective!
posted by
Ciel
on December 7, 2015 at 8:47 AM
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Probably what the ancestors thought but could not put it so. Good 'poem
posted by
C_C_T
on December 7, 2015 at 6:57 AM
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Each image in your poem jumps out at me.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 7, 2015 at 6:27 AM
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