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Be beautiful.
posted by
BC-A
on September 14, 2015 at 11:37 AM
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Have you thought about maybe eliminating some of the beginnings with be? perhaps alternate stanzas ....just a thought...otherwise wonderful poem
posted by
Annicita
on September 14, 2015 at 6:15 AM
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Re: Warning...
I do have many more sad poems but feel free to skip over them if you feel the need. I have been writing for over three years.
posted by
Charcoal_Jewel
on September 13, 2015 at 1:23 PM
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That's better we like cheerful poems.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 13, 2015 at 10:54 AM
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Re: Thank you.
Thank you so much for your comment! It is much appreciated.
posted by
Charcoal_Jewel
on September 13, 2015 at 10:35 AM
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very loving and lovely to read. Thank you.
posted by
Kabu
on September 13, 2015 at 10:05 AM
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