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I don't like to knuckle under either, and it is very hard for me to zip my lip.  I talk way too much.

posted by TAPS. on January 13, 2015 at 8:20 PM | link to this | reply

PatB

Loads of description about events and people

posted by WileyJohn on January 12, 2015 at 8:02 PM | link to this | reply

there, lots of emotions revealed here and they tell us so much of how the characters are feeling.

posted by Kabu on January 12, 2015 at 5:54 PM | link to this | reply

Pat

It flows...

posted by Nautikos on January 12, 2015 at 10:00 AM | link to this | reply

I like this Pat, you know how devious a woman can be, unfortunately they play that game too skillfully as they age and sometimes it does not pay off. It is a cool game for the young ones you will have tested it yourself.

posted by C_C_T on January 12, 2015 at 7:17 AM | link to this | reply