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This story is so believable.  That's what makes it a fun read.  
There are so many homeless people in KC and it is so cold that The City Union Mission and The Rescue Mission are already full at night and many meals are served everyday.  No telling what those that hang out at parks and under bridges find while rummaging thru dumpsters, etc.

posted by TAPS. on November 13, 2014 at 3:45 PM | link to this | reply

PatB

I just need things made more clear as I read along, I have a hard time pieceing parts together. Like Kabu helped me connect that the girl who said it was incredible was actually a person that knew what it really is. Well PatB I'm not as sharp as Kabu is but if I stick with it I think it has real potential.

posted by WileyJohn on November 13, 2014 at 2:02 PM | link to this | reply

i have a flying feeling that this will not be finished tomorrow. Sniff....i shall just have to read it when I get back. Sniff. It is a really good story and doesn't need to be rushed.

posted by Kabu on November 13, 2014 at 9:37 AM | link to this | reply

Pat

I forgot to mention - would you please read my post in 'Thoughts'? Maybe you could help someone...

posted by Nautikos on November 13, 2014 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply

Pat

The plot thickens very well...

posted by Nautikos on November 13, 2014 at 7:32 AM | link to this | reply