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Kabu...this reminds me of that song..

"Dance Your Life Away", and for a minute I thought I saw the witches from Macbeth dancing around the cauldron..

posted by Rumor on July 12, 2014 at 10:29 AM | link to this | reply

I like rewrites this is fun. What do you think I wrote a little review on Amazon UK on your book of course I could not praise it as I boasted and said I had bought you a warm coke in London years ago. But I did say it was well worth reading on Prime if cash was short. I thought some might have a go out of curiosity. The life of an Author is a hard one we hear only of the successful one or two, but it said in the paper most struggle to make ends meet when writing full time. I'll take a third of the royalties.

posted by C_C_T on July 12, 2014 at 7:30 AM | link to this | reply

It's lovely and catchy - and the world dance graphic is perfect with it. :)

posted by Pat_B on July 12, 2014 at 3:57 AM | link to this | reply

I'm sure you sing this to music - makes a great lullaby too.

posted by shobana on July 11, 2014 at 9:44 PM | link to this | reply

Kabuiepie-;)!

A great rewrite love, if my legs weren't so bad I'd ask you toget up and dance baby.

posted by WileyJohn on July 11, 2014 at 7:42 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu

Interesting! It cries out to be set to music...

posted by Nautikos on July 11, 2014 at 6:04 PM | link to this | reply

Reading your poem put a big smile on my face.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 11, 2014 at 5:00 PM | link to this | reply

Still as lovely as the first time I read it.  Love you.

posted by lovelyladymonk on July 11, 2014 at 4:11 PM | link to this | reply

Wow!  That one made me dizzy!  LOL

posted by TAPS. on July 11, 2014 at 3:49 PM | link to this | reply