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Yes I think it adds feeling to the story Pat and a reminder how things were . I am having trouble replying to comments on my page but it works OK on this one
posted by
C_C_T
on April 19, 2014 at 11:26 PM
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Well done.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 19, 2014 at 9:02 PM
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and keep writing darling. These rewrites never end do they
posted by
Kabu
on April 19, 2014 at 7:22 PM
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Pat
Well written! And your reasonig makes sense...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 19, 2014 at 5:16 PM
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