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This is Kabu at her best.

posted by UtahJay on January 26, 2014 at 12:03 PM | link to this | reply

what mean man that Ugly Tom was

posted by Lanetay on January 26, 2014 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

Better off in the chicken house than under the same roof with

that ...  well, I've thought of several adjectives, none of them fit for prime time... so will settle for scum.

posted by Pat_B on January 26, 2014 at 4:51 AM | link to this | reply

Alright I might buy it if it is an E-book and not very expensive or as a signed copy. You are a very cruel writer killing poor Mary, she deserved to live and see her son make good. Poor little bugger deserved something. I think this is the best you have done never-the-less. I could only see one word that seemed incongruous. Pass the spittoon.

posted by C_C_T on January 26, 2014 at 1:15 AM | link to this | reply

You do a great job building up the characters.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 25, 2014 at 7:30 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu

I agree with TAPS - this might be movie material...

posted by Nautikos on January 25, 2014 at 7:18 PM | link to this | reply

I'm already thinking of it as a movie and who might play the parts.

posted by TAPS. on January 25, 2014 at 7:02 PM | link to this | reply

You've got a real winner here, Kabu.

posted by TAPS. on January 25, 2014 at 6:52 PM | link to this | reply