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I welcome such a change - and could feel it reading your poem. Well done!
posted by
adnohr
on September 11, 2013 at 7:08 AM
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Ciel
Very nice! The breath of autumn...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 10, 2013 at 8:37 PM
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Ciel
fThe summer wind’s cool love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on September 10, 2013 at 3:09 PM
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Sounds good to me! Let Autumn begin . . . 
posted by
JimmyA
on September 10, 2013 at 2:18 PM
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I think it must be nice to have a breeze that has embraced a mountain. You describe it perfectly, well done Ciel.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 10, 2013 at 10:42 AM
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What a beautiful scene you paint with words.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 10, 2013 at 10:22 AM
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i like that imagery of the curtains being billowed like sails... nice poem... 
posted by
Carolyn_Moe
on September 10, 2013 at 7:02 AM
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Nicely evoked sensation of a fresh breese..
posted by
Pat_B
on September 10, 2013 at 3:16 AM
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I love that. It wasn't that way here--HOT, HOT, HOT. Maybe tomorrow....or the next day....or the next?
posted by
TAPS.
on September 9, 2013 at 8:24 PM
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I love to let all that delightful fresh air into the house!!1 nice poem dear friend O' mine.
for you....
posted by
Kabu
on September 9, 2013 at 7:44 PM
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