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wonderful job....wasn't expecting that ending!

posted by Annicita on May 7, 2013 at 7:42 PM | link to this | reply

Good poem, I just wish she could have done it more naturally .

posted by C_C_T on May 7, 2013 at 5:55 AM | link to this | reply

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$I guess that it’s like there's a train set out there somewhere love.   BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on May 7, 2013 at 1:02 AM | link to this | reply

I like the way in which the poem flows and the tone of it.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 6, 2013 at 9:59 AM | link to this | reply