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Re: jeansaw

bca, i think i am a house creature, but we all like to get out once in a while.

posted by jeansaw on April 17, 2013 at 8:09 AM | link to this | reply

Re: mariss

i am glad you liked the poem, i also find things in poems that speak to me.

posted by jeansaw on April 17, 2013 at 7:57 AM | link to this | reply

Re: jimmy

at the moment i wrote that i am sure i thought there was a connection, but since i posted that poem i have forgotten what i was thinking. lol (happens as you get older,lol) sinking fast!

posted by jeansaw on April 17, 2013 at 7:55 AM | link to this | reply

jeansaw

$It’s been a while but I’ve been a house creature love.  BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on April 17, 2013 at 6:03 AM | link to this | reply

I know that sinking feeling of "I am what I say I am not"  thanks for portraying it.  I also feel like the little cheese stealing mouse at times,  Good Poem. 

posted by mariss9 on April 17, 2013 at 5:52 AM | link to this | reply

I'm not exactly sure of the connection between "sinking and swimming" and a "cheese-stealing mouse," but I believe a nice block of cheddar will float! Use it as a life raft, and nibble a little bit at a time! No "stealing" or "sinking" necessary . . .

posted by JimmyA on April 17, 2013 at 5:33 AM | link to this | reply

Re: annicita

yes, lol, i imagine that i am floating while thinking about sinking or swimming.

posted by jeansaw on April 16, 2013 at 3:27 PM | link to this | reply

cute poem....yes we usually do think in terms of the most opposite of sink or swim....how about just floating to safety

posted by Annicita on April 16, 2013 at 2:02 PM | link to this | reply